Correction Request from Ms.Haon(?) "Girl-Gathering Art Correction 1"

2016.10.17.

 Sarah
"Hi! I'm Sarah, WizComic's guide!"

 Gecka
“Hello, I'm HiroGecka, WizComic's creator/PR department!
Today, again we will work on Illustration Correction from Ms.Haon!”

Sarah
“Wow, so cute!! It's  Lovelive!!"

Gecka
"Today, again I'm going to explain about illustration using red pen.
First observe this!"

Sarah
"Hmmm, is it like this?
I mean, arms are so sloppy..."

Gecka
"I'm just drawing out, to show how it is anglewise."

Sarah
"Ah, surely it's no longer unnatural!"

 

 Gecka
"Warp is quite strong.
If this way, it'll defitefitely collapse."

 Sarah
"Ohhhh, I get it."

 Gecka
"It's better to be conscious about center of gravity."

Sarah
"Ahhh, it's a bit muscular..."

 Gecka
"Neck also has problem drawing.
Being in the corner, it may be a bit difficult to draw,
but illustration is important to be conscious of the whole picture
and draw.
Slowly, but you should be conscious!"

Sarah
"So it sticks out a bit."

 Gecka
"Obviously, it's correction.
It's important to be conscious about how it actually is."

Sarah
"I see."

Gecka
"Atmosphere is not bad at all, but I'm concerned about legth of her
arms and whether a girl in the middle will be okay,
when she gives aggresive hug..."

Sarah
"Hmmm, in the picture it should be..."

Gecka
"This is what I'm saying, this kind of spoiled thoughts create,
unnatural things in pictures.

Sarah
"Ah...yes."

Gecka
"Anyway, I adjusted to drawing with this arrangement.
However, the position becomes quite low.
Better positionings will be explained in the second part."

 Sarah
"Ohhh...?!"

Gecka
"That is..."

Sarah
"GULP"

Gecka
"I'll explain next time!!"

Sarah
"Whaaaaaat?!"


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Correction Request from "Waffle☆Cat"

October 14, 2016

Sarah
"Hi! I'm "Sarah", WizComic's guide!"

Gecka
“I'm creator Gecka from PR department!”

Sarah
“We're doing correction today, right? What kind?”

Gecka
"Yep, we will work on correcting Waffle☆Cat's illustration,
who applied from Twitter DM!"

Sarah
"Wow, it's so cute!!
Thanks for applying"

Gecka
"Madoka☆it must be Madoka from Magika!
I retouched to make it easy to watch the image received.
Now, please see the following correction!"

Sarah
"Yeaaah, the hair..."

Gecka
"This must be Twin Tail's task.
So is the case with Pony, but in this sense, Twin is more difficult to draw."

 

Sarah
"Swirl..."

Gecka
"Some finish drawing and make illustration,
depending on style of animation, they delete afterwards since it blocks.
However, if you're familiar, you can draw easily without paying attention to the swirl.
Surpringly, this is typical trap. Actually, swirl is important."

Sarah
"Of course..."

Gecka
"Like this, it's important to be conscious about the swirl when you draw bangs.
Consider swirl as landmark for bangs and it'll be so easy!"

 

Sarah
"With those bangs, I can't see flow part of the hair."

Gecka
"Yep, you can say it's easy to draw,
but you need to be careful since each character has different bangs!"

Sarah
"Ah, twin tails are definitely natural..."

Gecka
"This must be what is often seen.
Well,next is less space for bangs version."

Sarah
"Oh, it's a bit lower than the swirl!"

 Gecka
"Yep.You must have seen those bangs often, right?"

Sarah
"Ah, Madoka's hair!!"

 Gecka
"This is Madoka☆Magika's hair style.
The line for twin tails is not clearly shown,
if you don't look from the sides or back."

 

 

 

Sarah
"Oh, there is so much to choose from!!"

 

Gecka
By changing the amount of the bangs or purposely not drawing the flow,
you can create many variety of imagines.

Sarah
"Eh? Ah? It turns like this when I draw the line?!"

Gecka
"Yep, the body becomes too thick and can be used as boy character.
Anyhow, it's difficult to choose the right one
when you are beginner."

Sarah
"Ah, rough indictation of the shoulder width!"

Gecka
"With MOE illustration, basically 1 to 1.5 heads fits in shoulder width!
Please make sure you remember that!"

Gecka
"It was almost drawn naturally and beautifully,
but the imagine changes completely when you draw thumbs this way!"

 

Sarah
"That's it for today's correction!"
 Gecka
"Look forward to the next correction!!
Correction requests are available through Twitter DM
and mail forms!!"


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